Nicodemus
United Member
Warrior/ philosopher duality
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Post by Nicodemus on Nov 15, 2003 17:37:52 GMT -5
Here are 4 poems of mine I'd like to share- (1) The sun sinks slowly Into darkened sky leaves on trees Quit dancing As the bird Neglects to sing. The wind heaves Just one last sigh Restless to wake Dust that is sleeping On dirty step A rose cries As it'e petals bleed And laments over It's withered beauty Tear drops Dew drops Adorn the ground in morning.
(2) This void
Mysteriously divided one dreaming the other slipping into blackened rooms; movements slowed by the horror. Inexplicable absence hearing crying, a scalding lament defeated, lamed; by ungodly magic.
(3) Humid Taste
Peering through the pallable nigt Darkness presses it's thick warm blankness upon me Moonless and moist as black velvet. Poisonous air about us- a sudden chill as fast as glass with the mental chill of sudden death.
(4) Engage the mind/ Please the body
Graceful in dialect tentative interest The hurried breathless pleading memory of loveliness pierces me, Smiling abstractly, seriously delighted, begging an indulgence.
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Post by Morrigan on Nov 15, 2003 17:39:32 GMT -5
Very very good. ;D You write really really well.
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Nicodemus
United Member
Warrior/ philosopher duality
Posts: 56
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Post by Nicodemus on Nov 17, 2003 13:16:38 GMT -5
I try....
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Post by Morrigan on Nov 17, 2003 18:52:58 GMT -5
You are really really good. ;D
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