BLIND AND BEAUTIFUL

[waterspirit]

I gaze into your mystical eyes for hours
They are like roses in a field of flowers
I'm being sucked in by thier many powers
They are soft with love,
Much sweeter than i could possible dream of
The only thing that compares,
are the heavenly lands above,
They glisten with emotions,
They charm like sercet potions
I linger on their every blink
I go numb when I see that deadly wink
Have you ever stopped to think
About how they make me feel
It makes me feel like what im feelin for you is real
No other beings eyes compare
Yes sweetie those eyes are very rare
And with them untouched, in mint condition,
Oh girl you got me wishin... that you cared for me...
So I could constantly gaze into thier beauty
I know you wonder why...
I could notice so much about about your eyes...
Sometimes it makes me cry...
Because, even though your eyes are so beautiful,
They are as blind as can be,
Blind... for they don't seem to notice me.

[Freya]

*applauds* Outstanding! But sometimes, too true for some people. I know that feeling.. it has happened to me before.. I suppose it happens to everyone?

[Knight Of Swords]

Unrequited love is the most painful of all...

But nice poem all the same ;D

[waterspirit]

thanks u two i work on that poem for a while