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Post by Gaheris on May 22, 2002 15:59:15 GMT -5
Hi ppl, this is my 1st poem, but i just needed to put it down.
"One Question"
One day it will come,
the members will shine,
under a huge invissible dome of protected divine,
you feel the wonder?
One day it will come.
dont worry all is done,
things are written,
thy worries are mine,
am i selected or shall i die?
one day i will cry and weap,
this road is fast,
how further is this steep?
Am i a shepherd or a sheep? |
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Post by PeaceInTheLight on May 22, 2002 16:13:46 GMT -5
Interesting...
It really speaks a lot on what you feel the future is going to be. It rings of uncertainty and confusion. Hope for a better time that you see. It makes me think to the future...
interesting icon too... the same and yet different
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Post by CatBreath on May 22, 2002 16:14:19 GMT -5
wow
i really like that one
especially
the ending
deep dude
deep
ass kicking
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROCK N ROLL!
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Post by Gaheris on May 22, 2002 16:24:57 GMT -5
Thnx Cat ;D
LK, The symbol you see inside my avatar, the same that was in the old one, is my personal symbol, my symbol of power, that i got in a dream, from an Air dragon...
I explain; the circle means unity, bound and harmony.
The vertical line with the wings is a symbol of an airdragon, air dragon means wisdom, power and intelligence... this symbols is as far as i know unknown...
The triangle in the middle is a symbol of Air...
The symbol means, that i am protected, bound to an Airdragon... that is as far as i got...
I hope to find out more someday.
LLaP,
Súrion
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Post by Freya on May 22, 2002 19:00:12 GMT -5
Oh my god.. that is wow!!! Probably better than most of what I have.. we will see! Not that it's a contest though!!
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Post by Gaheris on May 23, 2002 2:59:16 GMT -5
Thanks Freya,
Please let's not make this a contest, it is just a poem that i wanted to add, i just popped in my mind. I am not planning to put poems here often...
LLaP,
Súrion
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Post by Freya on May 23, 2002 15:49:56 GMT -5
Precisely what I said.. A contest would be pointless, we don't need it not for this..
Even though you might not post a poem all the time, I can't wait for the next one.
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