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Post by Freya on Jun 12, 2002 1:50:17 GMT -5
I'd give anything
Just to be your girl
The one you will give your trust and love
And is part of your world
Like two romantic doves
Flying towards the sunset
To know that when I'd awake
I'd never be let go
That our love would be like a river
Very big and has a nice flow
But suddenly I realize
That all this was was my fantasize
That you would never love me
I'd never end up to be your girl.
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Post by WitchBoy on Jun 12, 2002 2:04:32 GMT -5
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Post by Freya on Jun 12, 2002 2:11:28 GMT -5
Wow.. I think you may be one of the first to say you can relate to my poetry.
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Post by WitchBoy on Jun 12, 2002 2:14:28 GMT -5
always can nicky  |
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Post by Chaos_Childe on Jun 12, 2002 23:01:55 GMT -5
A great poem... the curse and sorrow of unrequited love... who can say they can not relate to that? I certainly do  |
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Post by Freya on Jun 12, 2002 23:28:51 GMT -5
What a kid! Thanks james!! I'm glad I can touch your heart too..
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Post by Chaos_Childe on Jun 12, 2002 23:34:37 GMT -5
I say what I mean... and mean what I say... You are a great poet....  |
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Post by Freya on Jun 12, 2002 23:39:35 GMT -5
I hold that dear to my heart...
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Post by Chaos_Childe on Jun 12, 2002 23:44:09 GMT -5
As you should... In my thousand times and thousand faces I have seen many poets both good and bad.... You will hold firmly in my good list... |
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Post by Freya on Jun 13, 2002 2:23:17 GMT -5
Well, it sure does show you're jay's friend.. either he taught you or you taught him but you both are sweet talkers... either way, I'm not complaining!
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Post by Chaos_Childe on Jun 13, 2002 10:51:53 GMT -5
If you wear your heart on your sleeve like we both do then all good truths sounds sweet...
All unfortunate truths sound accurate...
And all lies can be seen as the light-destroyers they are...
We didn't teach each other this, but it is one of the reasons why we have been friends for so long.
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Post by Freya on Jun 13, 2002 23:05:34 GMT -5
Very true. What a great way to say it!! Could of said it any better.
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