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Post by Freya on Jun 23, 2003 15:37:37 GMT -5
Beads of sweat trickle down my back
Shots of shivers run up my arms.
Hearing his name drives me insane
Hearing his voice makes me float.
Mysterious and hidden
Keeps me on my toes
Dressed in black
Keeps me excited
The look of his eyes
Turns me shy
The feel of his body
Mixes my "elements".
I lose all words
I lose all concentration
He's everything I ever wanted
Everything I ever needed
My friends envy me
For having caught his eye
Am I truly that lucky
To only have a best friend?
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Post by AngelisX on Jun 23, 2003 16:43:14 GMT -5
Man... you've gotta stop writting about me like this. People are gonna start to worry! Angelis knows, man, Angelis knows... ;D
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Post by waterspirit on Jun 23, 2003 19:11:33 GMT -5
lol dont start the gossip
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Post by Freya on Jun 23, 2003 19:39:27 GMT -5
I never said it was about you, dear! heh! But why would people worry??
Some poetry is written due to "inspiration" and others about emotions. I take mine where I can get them, where I can escape when I read it over again. If that means to write about friends, to write about a long love and other people, than so be it, right?
And what do you think you know, exactly? *raises an eyebrow in interest*
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Post by AngelisX on Jun 23, 2003 20:46:34 GMT -5
Freya, think about it: how often do you write about me? You know I like it and there are many refferences to me in this poem, which are plain as day to you and I. People, in my refference, reffered to my girlfriend, who frequents the board from time to time as a guest, I believe. "lol dont start the gossip" - waterspirit No gossip present, friend. Freya and I go a long way back... a really long way.  |
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Post by waterspirit on Jun 23, 2003 22:10:52 GMT -5
lol ok but freya was your poem about emotion or inspration
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Post by Freya on Jun 24, 2003 12:09:30 GMT -5
I quote something from a friend.. *Inspiration comes from "you" and "I"*.
So.. technically, both.. the inspiration was created from emotions that I felt..
Although sometimes, I think not long enough..
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Post by waterspirit on Jun 24, 2003 15:42:31 GMT -5
ok so it was both
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Post by Freya on Jun 25, 2003 20:34:45 GMT -5
yep.. exactly!
I must confess something though.. I wrote that poem in a couple minutes.. on the site, itself! I figured it needed something "fresh" "new" and "true"
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Post by waterspirit on Jun 26, 2003 14:33:40 GMT -5
just like my poem i wrote the other day except it took me awhile
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Post by Freya on Jun 26, 2003 15:32:42 GMT -5
well.. a short biograpy about me:
I have been wrirting poetry for near 3 years now.. I have over 200 poems written. It takes roughly 2 to 5 mins to write a poem of minimum 20 lines. They usually rhyme. My longest is 3 pages...
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Post by waterspirit on Jun 26, 2003 21:27:25 GMT -5
are u going to major in poetry
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